madridlindon
Jun 29 2010, 09:30 PM
The Date, 1901.
“Come one Come all” the Barkers Say. “See the Great Pan-American Exposition” they say.
“A Happy Joyous time” They Say. What They Say…Well, Don’t Even Know the Half of it.
Below the Surface one man, tries to stop the evils of corruption and Greed. To stop the tyrannies to save the people from a force of which has never been seen before. How Far will one man go to save all the people who mocked him?
It’s all Fun and Games at…
This is My Alternate Zombie History Fan Fiction Based on the 1901 World Fair in New York, Most of the Characters will be Historicaly Based but You guys knowing my Rpg's know i have something Cool Planned. Featuring Cameos by;
Nikola Tesla
President William McKinley...
And Many More Stayed tuned Folks.
madridlindon
Jun 30 2010, 07:54 PM
My Name is Leon-
I am not sorry for my crime. Only Few People Understand my intensions, and even Fewer understand the Horrors just below the surface of civilization. The World is Corrupt and No one is Safe. The Good People are always going to be the Victims, From the Lonely Pauper to the Mighty Diplomat. And in This War The Victims always become the Enemies, and I Refused to let More Good People Succumb to this Anymore. I Remember the First Day I Started to Notice the Changes.
The Sky was Thick, Thick with the Smog of Burning Fires. Workers Protested outside the Mill, Refusing to Labor for the Filthy Slave driver of owners. Now at that Point I was Just a Recluse, A Scabber to Some. I Needed Work and if Anyone was Hiring I was going to take the job. Now I Knew the C.H. Freely & Company was in Hot water With some workers, the protest was going on for a couple days now. But The Protest would Die Down and the employees would go back to work, Sluggishly yes, but that was because of the defeat, I Figured.
“Leon! Stop Rubbernecking and get back to work.” Yelled the Foreman. I Would of snapped back at him ,but being paid less then Dirt I hadn’t a Leg to stand on.” The foreman was a Large man, with thinning Hair. With less than a 4rth grade education one can only get so far. But He Had a Wild temper and had no idea when to stop. “So Mister Leon Neiman, are you actually going to work today, or are you going to slack off like you always do.” I walked away, pitying the poor soul and all his inbred Family. “Hey! Don’t walk away, Get back here, You know I Have Half a mind to Tell The Management about you, and they have a way of putting people in their place.” Now Believing this to be the rantings of a blithering idiot I turned and wished to say “Now, what in the world are you talking about, Some empty threats from a Hair Brained Gorilla who’s to scared to take matters into his own Hands!” instead of “Yes Sir.”
I Let him have his moment, he just ranted and raved, Until Glass was Shattered. Gun fire filled the parking lot. Most Workers Crowded against the windows, and the Foreman hid under a bench. But some workers just stood at their lines pouring the Steel into the molds, as if nothing was going on. I Walked to a small window just above a Table, I stood on the table and peered out. The Pinks had arrived. They Called themselves The Pinkerton Detectives, they are a private U.S. security guard and detective agency, but usually they have been hired nowadays to Break up strikes and protect Fat Cats.
A Gun fight had broken out between them and the Protestors, the pinks armed with their Signature Winchester Rifles, and the workers with steel pipes and small snub nosed pistols. But that was Not the oddity, I was intrigued by the Silent workers, ignoring the world around them. Now I haven’t know a man to be that Lethargic to not react in a gun battle.
Silence was now the replacement than the brutal Noise of warfare. The Bullets had stopped, the crowd had dispersed, and the Pink’s dragged the bodies to the Hearses. But Still Not a wince of emotion came from those few workers. Maybe the Foreman was onto something.
crazyshot7
Jun 30 2010, 09:46 PM
Awesome, keep it up!
My only complaint though is the caps lock. You seem to just randomly capitalize first letters of words for no reason.
madridlindon
Jul 1 2010, 03:16 AM
Ya thats a bad habit of mine, I'm trying to stop but the words just look so right with capitals, but i know it's wrong.
crazyshot7
Jul 1 2010, 04:34 AM
QUOTE (madridlindon @ Jul 1 2010, 05:16 AM)

Ya thats a bad habit of mine, I'm trying to stop but the words just look so right with capitals, but i know it's wrong.
Ya I know that happens to me some times also :x