After leaving the bar Edgar O'malley had pulled out a cigar and lite it after he saw a man with a gun
standing in the road looking panicky Edgar put his hand on his holster ready for a fire fight.
“Put down the gun son” he saw the man was in a panic “we cant stop it its don't its finished.... you don't need to know you don't want to know my problem...or know my name were all going to di...” than the boy got hit by a car he flew off the hood like a rag doll and landed on the pavement blood started leaking out the side of his head and his head was in an unnatural position his eyes were wide up looking blank at edgar. His friend bobby Pizarro a cop.
bobby answered the phone “hello you have reached the police office of new york... “.
“ bobby I need your help a boy got hit by a car just earlier I need you to check it out”
a car accident in new york was a normal thing but this one was different “ill be there you hold on”
Edgar came up to the body and put on gloves an checked his pockets all he had was
a knife a few bullets and an empty wallet that had a note and a name written inside ray
he grabbed the note it had most of the words had been ruined by the water he landed in when he died

Lisa I have an emergency come help please I love you. You said...

who is Lisa? Edger thought but he heard the sirens coming up the street towards the bar and he looked
at bobby walked up to him Edgar showed Bobby what he had found on the body of ray then bobby said “we need to close off this scene now we don't need this to be a front page picture lets go” they started to close off the crime scene when bobby asked “how you enjoying retirement so far?” bobby had a large head that looked like a water melon almost he was highly pock marked to the point of it being ugly on his cheeks and forehead he was balding at the time when he was in the force he had a head full of hair now he was starting to bald but he could still see the young man he had once knew “yeah am doing fine” Edgar pulled out his flask filled with bourbon and drank from it and wiped his lips and then
put the flask away.
“you need to come in and answer a few questions alright?” Edger nodded yes
and walked toward his car and headed towards the police station and bobby came in the car “you know I knew that boy he was nothing but trash and that is all he ever was” edger nodded and said “is that so he did say something about everyone is going to die” bobby said looking at edger “you need to not worry about that we have it all under control and we will send out a few people to protect you if you like” they finally arrived at the police station
it was two hours of questions when edger was done bobby said “take care” edger turned around “do you know any Lisa” Bobby face stiffened “no I don't edger you sleep well” Edgar got drunk on the couch and passed out asleep and had a nightmare

he was walking though the woods his son who had died in a car accident when he was driving to a party
was there and ray was there both bleeding everywhere “FIND LISA FIND LISA FIND LISA” they both said edger said “WHO IS LISA I DONT KNOW WHERE TO FIND HER.” and he came to a room where he saw lisa a beautiful young girl red hair blue eyes round face perfect lips almost like an angel
then he heard a whisper “find her at the temple under the sky of red”

to be continued....

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edger woke up from his nightmare and grabbed his gun it was 11;00 pm he had only slept a few hours
and thought bobby was acting weird i need to check i few files but they wont let me in so i must sneak in to the police station some how. Walked out to the drive way and climbed into his car
edger started driving down the road in his car when he saw a black Mercedes with tinted windows was following him he drove for a little while watching the black car it was on his bumper.
he stopped at a restaurant and walked in the people got out and walked into the restaurant they were wearing suits something you see in the movies only this time it was real
he walked into the restroom they were not to far behind but far enough he started running and found a window he could get out he heard them run after but he was already out the window by then
they started firing there gun at Edger.
he pulled out his gun and shot him in his hand and arm and shot there tires it was pure madness people running around their was no way he was sneaking into the police station now

to the assassins
the two assassins that were sent to kill edger called there contact "sir we failed to get the mark sir"
the contact said "FINE I WILL DEAL WITH YOU LATER but for now activate code name "red sky"
"yes sir we shall do that now"

back to edger

edger had drove to his house to only find it burning and some of the police dead "oh my god what is going on" he saw bobby there "hello I am so sorry to see your house go up in flames maybe you can go to your ex-wife's place to stay also i know what happened there has been a serial arsonist he is caught now but he burned down your house and killed some of are officers he wont see daylight in a long time i know that" edger looked at him he couldn't stand looking at him but he did anyway "so bobby you know what happened eh and he is caught good im going to see if i can go somewhere"
edger drove to his ex wife's place she lived in an apartment
the door "hello" Jillian said "what the hell do you want now more money"
"no a place to stay my house burned down" she then said "oh my come in I am so sorry Edger"
edger whispered "i think someone is trying to kill me Jillian honestly I've been shot at and my home has been burnt down I am sick of this already if i wouldn't have went to that damn bar”
Jillian looked shocked at what he had said “oh my who do you think is trying to kill you she sett beside him”
she looked as beautiful as when they first met in school brown hair and gray eyes that just drew you in
she was wearing a lovely red dress and make up she was probably planning to go out but I had stopped all that when I knocked on the door “i don't know Jillian but honestly I wished we would have never got that divorce so many years ago after are son died but I blamed you and myself for the death of are son now I see what an idiot I was being”
Jillian hugged me tight within her arms “i am so sorry what I said to you also but we need to handle your problem first since someone is trying to kill you stay here for the night please or as long as you like I don't care”
she lightly kissed his lips and then he knew there problems were now over
and they can find this lisa together as soon as he told her about it he knew she was willing to help

TO BE CONTINUED....